Dharak

[dharakjoo]

NAME: Dharak "Son" Khan
AGE: 17 Years.

ORIGIN: Born from the unknown
OCCUPATION: Dragon Rider
GENDER & SEXUALITY: Male.


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LIKES:

- Most Dragons


DISLIKES:



STRENGTHS:

- Melee (Sword) Combat.

- Knowledge of Dragons. 


WEAKNESSES:

- None


FEARS:

- Ghosts


AMBITIONS:

- 
SECRETS:

- None


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OVERALL PERSONALITY:

- He is smart, but aloof boy who like dragons.


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PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:



PLAYBY:

- Normal/Armor:



- Face:





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HISTORY: He was born from the unknown land by his deceased mother. As he grown 17, he finds away to find his real home.


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WEAPON OF CHOICE: Dharak has a viking sword to slash the enemies.


FIGHTING STYLE: Dharak was the good swordsman and attempt to tame the dragon without hurting it.

[PIME2]

Welcome to Berk’s Dragons. There are a lot of things that need to be changed to this application before it can be accepted. For starters I feel that Dharak Khan is a very ‘vikingy’ name. In regards to his origin, while he might not know about where he came from, as his creator I would guess you had an idea of it.

Other than that a lot more detail is required. You need to include more characteristics, you need to add at least 3 likes, 4 dislikes, 2 strengths, 4 weaknesses (no one has no weaknesses), 3 fears, 4 ambitions and 2 secrets, as we require you write at least four of each characteristics (except for secrets, which we only require 2 for). Similarly you need to write a lot more about your character’s personality, physical description and history. You should be able to write at least a paragraph on personality and appearance, and given he’s 17 years old there should be more information than a single sentence.

I'll take another look at this application. Oh one last thing, your application does not include the "Keyword Hidden in the Rules" and "Cbox Name". Could you please add these back into the application as they are both required for it to be accepted, as they show that you have read the rules.

[dharakjoo]

Oh, sorry about it. I'm write too short.