Tyra Stormhold & Thunderbird [Ready]

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Welcome to Berk's Dragons! Your app looks pretty interesting, but there are a few things that need fixing:

I feel like you need some drawbacks concerning your character's intelligence. She may be smart and have a good knowledge about Stoker class dragons, but is there something she doesn't know, that might hinder her sometimes?

I don't get how scars could be a weakness, unless they give her some sort of handicap? If so, could you tell us what's wrong with her? If it damages movements in her arm, you will have to consider her bowmanship and other activities regarding strength.

Last of all - The Keyword is incorrect.

I think that's all I can see for now - Let me know when you have made the changes!

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I'll repeat it again - I'd like to see some weaknesses concerning her intelligence - she can't know *everything*, she must surely have a weakspot in her knowledge? That could be exploited in RP, mind you

If she has a near constant cough, it's going to ruin her breathing, and in extensive physical extersion, when you need as much air you can get, the coughing will only really be made worse, and could be fatal. Also archery, if she has a fit of coughs when she's trying to aim, that's really going to be useful. If she's good at combat she needs the health to go with it. Or inversely she has the cough and it gives her a severe handicap, which you will have to mention in the app.