Kizlec Dreki

[Kizlec Dreki]

NAME: Kizlec Dreki.

AGE: 15. Birthday: August 22nd.

OCCUPATION: Viking-In-Training.

GENDER AND SEXUALITY: Female and Heterosexual.

LIKES:
- Prefers warm weather.
- Stargazing.

- Night time.
- Running.
- Swimming.

DISLIKES:
- Insensitivity.
- Ignorance.
- Rodents.
- Gronkles.

STRENGTHS:
- She is a an excellent runner and swimmer.
- Shows loyalty once given enough reason to trust someone.
- Speaks little dragonese but understands all.
- She has an extraordinary resistance to cold.

WEAKNESSES:
- Slippery ground(When it's wet, she slips over a lot as she likes running.)
- Daydreaming.
- Gronkles.

- Bows and arrows.

FEARS:
- Deadly Nadders(Not as much as Gronkles.)
- Gronkles.
- Rodents.

- Bows and arrows.

AMBITIONS:
- To be the best dragon rider she can be. 
- Not to be afraid of Gronkles though it is very unlikely. 
- Trying not to space out as much. Its not really an ambition, but this is one of her goals.
- To find a partner, as of what her father had said to her when she was little, she is afraid she will die alone

SECRETS: 
- She had never touched a dragon when her parent was alive, but she got killed by a  Gronkles and Nadders that's all she remembers.

- She had killed her father when he was training her, she wasn't that good and when a dragon flew by she got distracted and sot him in the chest which lead to death.

OVERALL PERSONALITY:

Usually quite but can be talkative once she starts talking, smart and wise when it comes to fighting and deference. She loves most dragons and would love her own. She wants to be a dragon rider and train her own wild dragon because of the stories her mother told her, of a great dragon rider that saved many people. She finds show-offs annoying and she usually speaks her mind, even if she doesn't want to say it. And when she's sees a Gronkle, she can faint which can be unhelpful at times and when around Nadders, she's always on edge.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:

Tall and slender with an hour-glass figure, her hair is black and reaches just past her shoulders. She wears a light ebony skirt with black fabric that is just above her knees and a dark grey singlet. Black fur boots.

HISTORY: 
When she was five, two Nadders and a Gronkle were fighting, when the fight got a bit more, heated, they started blasting fire and one fire from the Gronkle hit her mother and she died. And after her mother died her father was always mean her, calling her names and telling her that her mothers death was her fault. That has scared her... but she won't talk about it and one her father said sorry and offered to teach her how to use a bow, but she shot him by accident.

FAMILY: She had a mother called Amber Dreki, but was killed when Kizlec was five and a father called Arsel Eindride.

WEAPON OF CHOICE: A small dragon bone dagger that is half the length of her arm.(The bones were from a Terrible Terror that had died from old age and was a family dragon when Kizlec was five.) 

KEYWORD HIDDEN IN RULES: ******************

CBOX NAME: F1rePh0en1x.

 

[Redkitebait]

Your character definitely looks interesting! But there needs to be a few changes before she can fit into the BD universe:

First off, I need you to make your character's name more Viking-y

For the likes, dislikes, strengths, weaknesses and ambitions, you're missing one more bullet, and one more for the secrets, the minimum for that one is two.
In the details, I'm not sure how slippery ground can be a weakness, you mean she has terrible balance?
Why does she fear deadly nadders?


Your personality and history need beefing up. Even if the trauma caused her memory loss, I, out of character, need to know whats up with her... That said, on Berk, dragons are friendly and wont attack, so I need a good reason why some gronckles decided to kill them!
Also, being shy and being talkative are rather opposites, pick which one suits your character the most! Remember characters that keep to themselves will have a harder time getting into RP's!

Afterwards your character's description doesn't fit the httydverse. Try and make your character more viking-y! Look what they wear in the franchise and inspire yourself from those designs

You're missing the last part of the application, please add it (and remove the dragon if your character doesnt have one:)

[b]FAMILY:[/b] [Put your character's nuclear family- mother, father, siblings (indicate if siblings are older or younger), spouse- or whoever your character currently lives with. Include extended family only if they are playable characters or otherwise significant to your character's story]

[b]WEAPON OF CHOICE:[/b] [If the weapon is special in some way (other than the 'average' stereotype of your weapon), please describe.]
[b]FIGHTING STYLE:[/b]



DRAGON (optional):
[b]NAME:[/b] [This part is for if you decide you human has a dragon, delete if they don't]
[b]GENDER:[/b]
[b]TYPE:[/b] [Look at the dragon Dragon Book thread for choices, or make your own]
[b]APPEARANCE:[/b] [What colour are they? Do they have some sort of pattern or unusual body feature?]
[b]PERSONALITY:[/b] [Try and be detailed !]
[b]STRENGTHS:[/b]
[b]WEAKNESSES:[/b]

[b]KEYWORD HIDDEN IN RULES:[/b]
[b]CBOX NAME:[/b]


Right, I think that's all I have to say for now, I will check this out again when fixes have been made! ^^

[Redkitebait]

It's getting there, but you're still missing the minimum requirements for the Likes, Dislikes, Strengths and Ambitions. The minimum is 4! If she likes running you could add that to the likes

I'm not too sure her surname it vVikingy, it sounds like it's of spanish origin rather than scandinavian

Secret: i think it's highly unlikely she would 'accidentally' kill her father with a bow. Surely her father isn't that stupid to walk in front of her when she has a bow drawn? If he's teaching her then he should know how to use bows safely and that would be one of the first things he would have taught her.

Personality:: Could you beef up the personality a bit? What makes her tick? What annoys her and makes her angry, how is she around other people? How is she around dragons, especially the ones she doesn't like? Things like that, and more if you can think of them!

Appearance:: What do you mean by silver-black hair? Is it black, or silver? or both?
Modern clothing of today's times aren't allowed on Berk's Dragons. Please try and respect the HTTYD universe style of clothing!
I think having such long hair to her knees would be terribly impractical. For day-to-day life and also living on an island full of fire breathing dragons... I'm not sure how long she'd have hair that long for... Do you think you could shorten it a bit?

History:: Could you bulk up the history? Surely more things have happened in her life than just her mother dying. When did she decide to start dragon training? Having her mother accidentally killed by a dragon would surely influence that.

Finally you're missing the last part of the application: your ooc (out of character)/cbox name!! We need to know how to call you when you're not playing as Kizlec

Aaand I think that's it! It's mostly a bunch of little tweaks so it shouldn't be too much of a problem I hope Let me know when you've made the fixes and I'll look over it again ^^

[Redkitebait]

Sorry for being late - real life issues and stuff, but im here now!

Having an abusive father that is killed is overdone (there's another pending app with almost exactly the same backstory, lol), I need a different reason for Kizlec to have 'accidentally' killed her father, if that's even the case. Heck, whats wrong with it being an accident? At least it'd give her a legitimate reason to fear and avoid using bows again, right?

I think that walking barefeet on the chilly island of Berk isn't a good idea. She would easily get frostbite and lose those feet if she did that! I think that's about it and you'll be ready to RP!

[Redkitebait]

Okay! Everything looks good now Accepted!

You can now register in the Who's Who and Population sections

Also make sure to change your display name to your characters! Have fun rping!